HI, ladies!!
Recently I am trying to exercise with Wii Fit, a kind of TV game, every day. I used to go to the gym near my house twice a week, but I quitted it after seriously starting my English study about one year ago. Since then I have never exercised at all, and my body is terrible now…I like watching some sports, but I like doing it by myself better.
By doing some yoga or muscle training, I enjoy myself at home when I am free, Oh, I’m always free…
Well, see you tomorrow, bye!
1 comment:
Dear Cherry,
I’ve tried to improve your English message.
Recently I am trying to exercise with Wii Fit, a kind of TV game, every day.
Probably, this would be:
Recently I have been trying to exercise with Wii Fit, a kind of TV game, every day.
I used to go to the gym near my house twice a week, but I quitted it after seriously starting my English study about one year ago.
This would be revised like this:
I used to go to the gym near my house twice a week, but I quitted it about one year ago because I started to study English seriously.
Since then I have never exercised at all, and my body is terrible now…
At first you state that you now do some exercises with Wii Fit, and so it is not logical to state “Since then I have never exercised at all”.
This can be remarked like this:
I rarely exercised over this past year, and the lack of exercises made me look terrible.
I like watching some sports, but I like doing it by myself better.
This one would be:
I like watching some sports, but I like playing sports better.
Bye-bye, Cherry.
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